Week 6: Progress

 

What feedback have you received on your current progress?

In terms of feedback for my current progress; I think I've been focusing too much on the layout and feel of the environment when the focus of the task isn't the environment, but the interactions. I may have neglected the implementation of the dialogue until fairly recently and that has definitely had an effect on my progress so far. Moving forward I'm definitely going to prioritise the interaction and making them smooth and "juicy." 

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On top of this, when I had some people playtest the dialogue, while the story flowed well, the actual dialogue felt a little bit clunky. Based on this feedback, I rewrote some of the dialogue lines to feel more "natural".
To do this, I read a few articles on "natural" scriptwriting and found my original dialogue did feel a little bit stilted. (MacGregor, 2021) 


The above is the dialogue I tested with playtests; I watched their reaction and asked for verbal feedback after they had finished playing through a few of the pathways. 


References
MacGregor, D. (2021, December 10). How to Write Natural Dialogue (with Examples) • First Manuscript. First Manuscript. https://firstmanuscript.com/tips-for-learning-to-write-natural-dialogue/


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